写作模考与自评 · PET 专项突破

这一节是完整的写作模考。请掐表 45 分钟，一次完成两题。

Part 1（20 分钟，约 100 词）

Read this email from your English friend Jo and the notes you have made.

From: Jo
Hi!
I'm coming to your city next month for a school trip! 【Say you're happy】
We'll only have one free afternoon. Where should we go? 【Suggest a place and why】
Is the weather warm in April? 【Tell Jo】
Do you want me to bring you anything from England? 【Answer】

Write your email to Jo using all the notes. Write about 100 words.

Part 2（25 分钟，二选一，约 100 词）

Question 2 — Article

You see this in an English-language magazine:
Should students wear school uniforms?
Write us an article giving your opinion and your reasons.

Question 3 — Story

Your story must begin with this sentence:
As soon as I got off the bus, I realised I had left my bag on it.

参考范文

Part 1（约 125 词）

Hi Jo,

That's fantastic news — I can't believe you're finally coming! I've been hoping you'd visit ever since we met online.

For your free afternoon, I'd suggest the old town because it has beautiful streets, small cafés and a famous tea house which is over two hundred years old. It's only fifteen minutes from your hotel by bus.

As for the weather, April here is usually warm and sunny, although it sometimes rains in the evening, so bring a light jacket just in case.

That's very kind of you! If it isn't too much trouble, could you bring some English tea? My mother would love to try it.

Can't wait to see you!
Wei

Part 2 · Article（约 120 词）

Should Students Wear Uniforms?

This is a question that divides many students, but personally, I am in favour of school uniforms.

Firstly, uniforms save time and money. Students don't have to decide what to wear every morning, and parents spend less on fashionable clothes.

Secondly, uniforms reduce comparison. In schools where everyone dresses the same, students are less likely to be judged by what they wear.

On the other hand, some people argue that uniforms limit self-expression. However, I believe students can show their personality through their hobbies, ideas and friendships rather than their clothes.

In conclusion, although uniforms are not perfect, I think they make school life fairer and simpler for everyone.

自评表（每题 20 分）

维度	5 分标准	你的分
Content	所有要点／批注都回应且有展开	/5
Communicative	文体正确、语气得体	/5
Organisation	分段清晰、过渡词齐全	/5
Language	无明显错误 + 有从句、时态变化、词汇替换	/5

扣分参考：

漏一个要点 → Content 扣 2 分
不分段 → Organisation 最多 2 分
全篇简单句 → Language 最多 3 分
低于 100 词 → Content 扣 1–2 分
每 2–3 个语法错 → Language 扣 1 分

改进循环（每篇作文都这样做）

写
自评打分
对照范文，找出三处你没做到的（不是抄，是记下技巧）
重写一遍
把新学到的句型抄进句型仓库

第 4 步「重写」是很多人不愿意做但最有效的一步。 同一道题写两遍的收获，远大于两道题各写一遍。

练习：把上面两篇按自评表打分，找出你最弱的那个维度，下一周专攻它。