PET 专项突破

Part 2 之一:议论文(article)

14 分钟

题型:给一个话题,让你为学校杂志或网站写一篇约 100 词的文章,谈自己的看法。


题目长这样

You see this notice in an English magazine:

ARTICLES WANTED
Is it better to live in a city or in the countryside?
What do you think? Tell us your opinion and give your reasons.
The best articles will be published.

Write your article in about 100 words.


四段式模板(万能)

第 1 段(引入 + 亮明立场)——约 25 词
 [用一个问句或一句话引入话题]
 In my opinion, ... / Personally, I believe ...

第 2 段(理由一 + 例子)——约 35 词
 Firstly, ... For example, ...

第 3 段(理由二 或 让步)——约 30 词
 Secondly, ... / On the other hand, some people say ..., but ...

第 4 段(结论)——约 15 词
 In conclusion, ... / Overall, I think ...

第 3 段用「让步」是拿高分的关键——先承认对方有道理,再反驳。这体现了 B1 要求的「解释和论证」能力。


满分范文(约 125 词)

City or Countryside?

Many people dream of living in the countryside, but personally, I prefer city life.

Firstly, cities offer far more opportunities. There are better schools, hospitals and jobs, which makes daily life much easier. For example, in my city I can reach three libraries in twenty minutes.

Secondly, cities are never boring. You can meet people from different countries and try food from all over the world.

On the other hand, I understand why some people love the countryside — it is quieter and the air is cleaner. However, I think you can always visit the countryside at weekends.

In conclusion, although country life has its advantages, I believe the city offers more chances to learn and grow.


为什么是满分

维度 表现
Content 明确的观点 + 两个理由 + 举例 + 回应反方
Communicative 有标题、语气得体(适合杂志文章,不像私人邮件)
Organisation 五段,每段一个功能;Firstly / Secondly / On the other hand / However / In conclusion 全套过渡
Language 定语从句(which makes...)、although 从句、比较级(far more、quieter)、词汇有替换(opportunities、advantages)

表达观点的句型库

亮明立场

  • In my opinion, ... / Personally, I believe that...
  • I strongly feel that...
  • As far as I'm concerned, ...
  • I would say that...

给理由

  • Firstly / Secondly / Finally
  • The main reason is that...
  • This is because...
  • What's more, ... / In addition, ...

举例

  • For example / For instance, ...
  • such as + 名词
  • Take ... as an example.

让步与反驳

  • Some people say that ..., but I think ...
  • On the other hand, ...
  • Although it's true that ..., ...
  • However, ...

结论

  • In conclusion / To sum up / Overall, ...
  • All things considered, ...

三个常见失误

  1. 没有立场:两边都说好,最后不表态——内容分低。必须选一边。
  2. 写成私人邮件:加了 Hi、Write back soon——文体错误,交际分掉。
  3. 只有观点没有例子:说 cities are better 但不说为什么、不举例——理由和例子才是 article 的肉。

练习:用四段式模板就下面任一话题写 100 词——
①学生该不该有家庭作业?②网上学习和课堂学习哪个更好?③年轻人该不该做兼职?

小纸条

PET 议论文的四段式模板是什么?第三段用「让步」为什么是拿高分的关键?

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