写作常见错误 Top 20（B1 版）

这一节汇总 B1 阶段中国考生最高频的写作错误。比 KET 的清单更进阶。

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A 组 · 基础错误（KET 阶段就该消灭）

1. 句子缺动词：I very happy → I am very happy
2. 三单漏 s：He like → He likes
3. 时态不一致：Yesterday I go → Yesterday I went
4. 名词单复数：many friend → many friends
5. 冠词：I am student → I am a student
6. because 和 so 连用 → 只留一个
7. 中文标点／i 不大写

这七条如果还在犯，说明基础不牢，B1 作文很难上 3 分。

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B 组 · B1 特有错误（重点）

8. although 和 but 连用

Although it was cold, but we went out.（错）→ 去掉 but

9. 被动语态用错分词

The letter was write by him.（错）→ written

10. 现在完成时配具体过去时间

I have seen him yesterday.（错）→ I saw him yesterday.

11. 宾语从句用疑问语序

I don't know where does he live.（错）→ where he lives

12. 条件句从句用 will

If it will rain, we'll stay.（错）→ If it rains

13. 定语从句多加代词

The man who he lives next door（错）→ 去掉 he

14. 动名词与不定式混用

I enjoy to swim（错）→ enjoy swimming
I look forward to see you（错）→ to seeing you

15. very 修饰比较级

very better（错）→ much better

16. 否定推测用 mustn't

He mustn't be at home（错）→ He can't be at home

17. 动名词作主语用复数动词

Learning languages are hard（错）→ is

18. 状态动词用进行时

I am knowing him（错）→ I know him

19. 双重比较

more easier（错）→ easier 或 more easy（前者对）

20. 中式表达直译

中式	地道
I very like it.	I like it very much.
open the light	turn on the light
learn knowledge	acquire / gain knowledge
The price is expensive.	The price is high. / The thing is expensive.
I think he is not right.	I don't think he is right.（否定前移）
welcome to Beijing（欢迎某人来）	作动词时是 We welcome you to Beijing

「否定前移」是很地道的一点：英语习惯说 I don't think it's a good idea，而不是 I think it's not a good idea。

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怎么用这份清单

不要每次都从头读 20 条。 做法是：

1. 写完作文后，只查你自己常犯的 5 条
2. 每次批改后，更新你的「个人 Top 5」
3. 当某一条连续三篇都没犯，就把它从清单里划掉，换一条新的进来

这份清单应该越来越短，最后变成一张空白纸。

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练习：改错

1. Although he is rich, but he isn't happy.
2. I don't know what does she want.
3. If it will be sunny, we will go out.
4. I'm looking forward to meet you.
5. He mustn't be the thief — he was with me.
6. This question is very easier than that one.
7. I have finished my homework yesterday.
8. I think this is not a good idea.（改成更地道的）