词汇升级：把作文写得不像小学生

Language 分里有一半是「词汇的丰富度」。这一节给一份替换清单。

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一、形容词替换（最见效）

别用	换成
good	excellent, wonderful, fantastic, useful, worthwhile, enjoyable
bad	terrible, awful, poor, unpleasant, disappointing
nice	lovely, pleasant, charming, friendly, delightful
big	large, huge, enormous, massive
small	tiny, little, compact
happy	delighted, pleased, cheerful, glad
sad	upset, disappointed, unhappy, miserable
interesting	fascinating, exciting, amazing
boring	dull, uninteresting
beautiful	attractive, gorgeous, stunning
important	essential, necessary, vital, significant
difficult	challenging, tough, complicated
cheap	affordable, reasonable, good value
expensive	costly, pricey

注意：不要为了用难词而用错。 一个用对的 useful 胜过一个用错的 indispensable。

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二、动词替换

别用	换成
say	mention, explain, suggest, point out, add
think	believe, feel, consider, be convinced
like	enjoy, be keen on, be fond of, prefer
get	receive, obtain, achieve, become
want	would like, hope to, wish to
make	create, produce, build, cause
very good at	excellent at, skilled at

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三、程度副词替换 very

别老用 very	换成
very good	really good / extremely good / incredibly good
very big	absolutely huge
very tired	completely exhausted
very interested	highly interested
a bit	slightly, fairly, quite

技巧：very + 普通词 → 一个强意词。 very tired → exhausted、very big → enormous、very happy → delighted。这个替换最能体现词汇水平。

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四、把句子写「长」的三种办法

办法一：加定语从句

❌ I visited a museum. It was very interesting.
✅ I visited a museum which was really fascinating.

办法二：加原因或让步

❌ I like swimming. It's good exercise.
✅ I like swimming because it keeps me fit and helps me relax.

办法三：加具体细节

❌ We went to the park.
✅ We went to the park near my house, where we spent the whole afternoon playing football.

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五、B1 常用的固定表达（写作用得上）

• be keen on 热衷于
• take part in 参加
• get on well with 与……相处融洽
• look forward to 期待
• be worth doing 值得做
• spend time doing 花时间做
• have the chance to 有机会
• make a decision / make friends / make progress
• it depends on 取决于
• in my free time 空闲时

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六、一个真实的改写演示

改前（很小学生）：
I like my school. It is very big. The teachers are very good. I have many good friends. I am very happy there.

改后：
I really enjoy my school. It is quite large, with a modern library which I use almost every day. The teachers are extremely helpful — they always explain things patiently when we don't understand. What's more, I get on well with my classmates, so I feel genuinely happy there.

同样的意思，Language 分差两档。 改动的只是：换词 + 加从句 + 加连接词 + 加细节。

练习：把这段改写——「I went to Beijing last year. It was very nice. I saw many things. I was very happy.」要求：换掉所有 very 和 nice，加一个定语从句，加一个 because。