Part 1：邮件写作模板 · PET 专项突破

题型：给你一封英文邮件，邮件旁边有 4 处手写批注（notes），提示你要回应什么。你要写一封约 100 词的回信。

题目长这样

Read this email from your English friend Kate and the notes you have made.

From: Kate
Hi!
I've just heard that you're going to move to a new school next term. 【批注：Yes — tell Kate why】
How do you feel about it? 【批注：Explain】
I'd love to visit you in the summer. Would that be OK? 【批注：Say yes and suggest when】
Also, what should I bring? 【批注：Suggest something】
Kate

Write your email to Kate using all the notes. Write about 100 words.

关键词：using ALL the notes。四个批注，一个都不能漏。

四段式模板

第 1 段（问候 + 回应批注 1）
 Hi Kate,
 Thanks for your email! / It was great to hear from you.
 Yes, [回应第一个批注，加原因]

第 2 段（回应批注 2）
 [表达感受，用 because 展开]

第 3 段（回应批注 3 和 4）
 Of course you can visit! How about [具体时间]?
 You should bring [具体物品] because [原因].

第 4 段（结尾）
 Write back soon! / Can't wait to see you!
 [你的名字]

满分范文（约 120 词）

Hi Kate,

Thanks for your email — it was lovely to hear from you! Yes, it's true. I'm moving to a new school because my family is moving to another city and the new school is much closer to our home.

To be honest, I feel both excited and a bit nervous. I'm looking forward to meeting new people, although I'll really miss my old friends.

Of course you can visit! How about the first week of August? The weather is lovely then, and we could go to the beach, which is only twenty minutes away.

As for what to bring — just some comfortable shoes, because we'll do a lot of walking!

Write back soon,
Ming

逐项检查为什么是满分

维度	表现
Content	四个批注全部回应：为什么转学 ✓、感受 ✓、同意来访并给时间 ✓、建议带什么 ✓
Communicative	语气亲切自然（lovely、To be honest、Can't wait 式表达），符合「给朋友写信」
Organisation	分了四段，一段一个话题；用 To be honest、Of course、As for 过渡
Language	定语从句（which is only twenty minutes away）、although 从句、both...and、时态有现在/将来/进行

必备句型仓库

开头

Thanks for your email!
It was great / lovely to hear from you.
Sorry for the late reply.

表达感受

I'm really excited about...
To be honest, I feel a bit nervous.
I'm looking forward to doing...
I can't wait to...

同意 / 邀请

Of course you can!
That would be great!
How about + 时间/做法?
Why don't we + 动词原形?

建议

You should bring...
I'd suggest bringing...
Make sure you bring...

过渡

As for your question about...
By the way, ...
Anyway, ...

结尾

Write back soon!
Let me know what you think.
See you in the summer!

三个必扣分的错误

漏掉一个批注——内容分直接掉一档，这是最大的失分。
抄题目原句——不算词数，也显得没能力。要换说法。
不分段——Organisation 分拿不满。

练习：用上面的模板写一封回信，情境：朋友问你最近在学什么新爱好、为什么学、难不难、要不要一起学。